Time
Such a tempting mistress.
Why wouldn’t anyone want more Time?
It’s such a lovely thing to have.
False, False, False
That’s what she would have you think.
I’ll tell you the truth,
Time is a burden
It weighs you down
like the heavens on Atlas.
It gives you a cursed life
Domed to the same fate for the rest of eternity.
But Time is useful,
It lets you do the things you want.
It gives you a chance.
A chance to live
To thrive,
To achieve,
To prosper,
To conquer.
False.
All it gives is a chance at destruction,
At ruin,
At pain,
At suffering.
And yet people still beg for more Time.
They think it will save them,
Deliver them to salvation,
It will do neither.
It will only make monsters out of us all.
All that shines turns to rust,
All that stands in Time turns to dust.
This poem was inspired by a song from Black Label Society called Rust a link can be found here.
I have often thought of the concept of time and more often than not it seems like an oppressive force. The creative voice inside me says that it is horrible and needs to be done away with, that deadlines are unnecessary and stifle creativity.The logical voice agrees that it is oppressive, however it also says that it is necessary. Time is a constant something we as humans rely on in our inconsistency. I am a firm believer that the monuments of civilization will one day crumble and all will be dust. The civilization we thought to be so mighty and unbreakable will be forgotten by most and only remembered in figments of stories by the few who care to look for the remnants of what we once were. We are not immortal and there are things that will outlast us. We cannot take the possessions we gain to the grave so why care about things over people, why not cherish the people around you instead of always trying to claw your way up an impossible ladder just so you can have an nicer house or a better car. There is no point.
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May 8, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Dear, Aaman
I love your style of writing, its so very unique and ive never read anything honestly in this style. The way your thoughts just flow together perfectly really adds something to your work. A really good job in capturing this perceptive on time, time that is so precious.
Love amrit chera
May 8, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Hey Aaman,
What an amazing piece! I really enjoyed reading it, in fact I actually wanted more to read. you have an amazing writing style that completely engages the reader. i was hooked from start to finish, and your poem left me in deep thought. your explanation (prose) was also incredibly and backed up the poem very well, adding to it and it left me in deep thought.
there is nothing really that I see as needing improvement, all I would say, is that I want more. Maybe you could make the poem longer, after all it is so incredible.
I look forward to reading more of your works!
Sinceraly Noor.